I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs McIntyre. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, May 31, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Kiaora Alyssa, thank you for sharing your work on Charlie and the Chocolate factory. I like how you have added videos to your slide show. Next time you could possible add a blurb about the slideshow.
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Hi Alyssa, wow what an amazing google slide! You are so clever, I love how. you made Charlie spin on slide 2, how did you do that? You had some fun facts in there, I was sad to hear he could only have 1 chocolate bar a year, I love chocolate, I would find that very hard. Would you?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.
Mrs Matthews
Hey there im Ben from south hornby school.i enjoyed how you animated basically all of the pictures.I didn't know that there was a new and old movie.Next rime maybe you could add not so many videos. how many facts are on all your slides.from Ben
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